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I chose the topic "The Impact of the Invention of the Internet on Society" because the internet plays a huge role in our everyday lives today. We use it almost around the clock, whether for communication, work, or information. Hardly anything in our lives runs without the internet, and this has brought about many changes. I find it fascinating to see how the internet not only influences our habits, but also how it has changed society as a whole. In my work, I want to examine in detail the positive and negative effects the internet has on us and our society. One area that has changed significantly due to the internet is communication. In the past, we wrote letters, made phone calls, or met in person to talk to each other. Today, most communication takes place via social networks or messaging apps like WhatsApp, Instagram, or Snapchat. This form of communication is, of course, much faster and more convenient, but it also has its disadvantages. For example, many of us are constantly online and reachable, which isn't always good for work-life balance. Furthermore, the internet makes it much easier to hide behind a screen. This affects the way we interact with one another, and communication often becomes less personal. In my work, I want to examine in more detail how the internet has changed our communication and whether these changes have only positive or also negative aspects. Another major topic is the world of work. Here, too, the internet has had a huge impact. In the past, most people had to travel to the office for work or have a permanent job. Today, thanks to the internet, almost everyone can work from home or anywhere. Working from home has become particularly widespread during the coronavirus pandemic and is now completely normal for many. New forms of work, such as working from home or being self-employed, have also become possible thanks to the internet. These changes bring many advantages, especially the ability to better control one's working hours and workplace, but they also bring with them new challenges. For example, people now have to learn to better separate work and leisure time because work often comes directly into the home. The internet has also created new professions, but at the same time, many old jobs have disappeared. In my thesis, I want to examine how the internet has changed the world of work, its advantages, and where problems arise. The central question I want to answer in my thesis is: "How has the internet changed communication and the world of work, and what opportunities and risks does this present?" I will examine the changes in communication and the world of work, examining both the positive and negative aspects of the internet. This will focus not only on the opportunities, but also on the risks and challenges associated with the digital world.