Application for training as an industrial clerk – is this application letter good enough?

Dear Sir/Madam,

Numbers, organization, and communication – it's precisely this diversity that makes the career of industrial clerk so appealing to me. I was very interested to learn about the opportunity to complete this training with you. Your innovative spirit and your resource-saving and environmentally conscious approach in particular convinced me that I would be able to contribute and further develop my commercial talent and organizational skills here.

During my work-and-travel stay in Athens, Greece, I independently organized my trip and responded flexibly to new challenges. This not only allowed me to demonstrate my independence and strong communication skills, but also strengthen my intercultural competence. I see these skills as an ideal foundation for successfully tackling the commercial, organizational, and communication tasks of an industrial clerk.

My business administration studies at the Niederrhein University of Applied Sciences also gave me initial insights into accounting and business processes. However, I realized that I lacked practical relevance in my studies. Therefore, I would now like to expand my theoretical knowledge through practical training at your company. I am particularly looking forward to processing sales transactions and supporting sales negotiations.

I am convinced that with my structured and team-oriented approach to work and my willingness to learn, I can make a valuable contribution to your company.

I look forward to convincing you of my motivation and abilities in a personal conversation.

Best regards

What I like about the company and what tasks I'm looking forward to will, of course, be individually tailored to the job description. Do you have any suggestions for improvement?