Are these correct bullet points?
My teacher is pretty strict with bullet points. She wants everything nominalized as much as possible, and of course, not a sentence. Can someone give me an opinion and, if necessary, improve it? I also wanted to ask whether the bullet points make sense or whether they have no connection at all. It's about a book, and of course I'll say more about the content, but mostly verbally. THANK YOU!!!!!!
1. Time and place:
– Plot about post-war Germany 1947
2. Contents
– destroyed Germany
-Fight for the survival of the family
– five friends: Ballo, Sparrow, Owl, Pit and Schonny
– Adventure in the Ruins
– Founding a youth gang
– failed break-in by the gang
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At 1.: Better only "afterwar time in Germany 1947" or "from 1947" or "from 19?? to 19??"
At 2.:
Perhaps better: "Through World War II destroyed/devastated cities"
Fight for the survival of the family? What family? A certain family or family in general?
Thank you. Families in the general sense…has forgotten this, I am improving immediately!!!