Are there commas missing in this sentence?
If I were you, I would have anything but the desire to move.
Before a comma or not?
Sure, you have to take care of everything on your own, but you have peace and quiet, can do what you want in your own place, and…
Should there be a comma after "make" or not?
1It is always bad if sentences are not terminated. Then you can only guess how to proceed. I suspect that it is about the continuation of the listing in main sentence 2.
If this is true, after “will” a comma is necessary in any case in order to complete the auxiliary charge. For example, the sentence could end: “(…), what you want, and could also celebrate parties without permission from parents.”
In your place, I’d just have everything but a desire for a move.
Of course you have to take care of everything alone, but you have your rest, you can in your ownn Bude do what you want and…
Before as no comma.
After make a comma, because there’s a subset.
My knowledge is the comma before that as n can comma and no need comma. You can put it, but you don’t have to.
I’d just split the last box set.
first sentence: no comma before than
second sentence: after making a comma, because a supplement follows