Are there any errors in this text?
Hello, my friends! I came up with a new melody and then wrote the lyrics for it. Unfortunately, I think there might be some grammatical errors, as I'm not a native speaker. Please tell me if there are any errors in the lyrics? How would you rate it? I'd also be happy if you could give me your advice. Thank you.
//:What is our world,
it is the fields,
it is the forests,
Anyone who likes it
likes to see all these things,
loves every visible star.
Our beautiful forest,
brings us joy,
gives the light today,
are you young or old,
you will always stand here,
to see this beauty. ://refrain
Today the sun shines brightly,
it is warm here,
We like to hike.
but our lives go too fast,
so experience and try.
A bird sings its song,
that sounds very nice,
brings peace,
and everything you see here now,
that's so wonderful.
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Well, especially your introduction text is faulty.
Poetry consists of compressed language in summer, and I do not notice anything bad. For content: Why does the forest give light? This is illogical…
Hello Hello! Thank you for your proper message and thank you. So. I generally think that you are right that the poem has no errors and is correct error-free. But you said that my input text has mistakes. Why do you think so? I wouldn't be sad if you wrote all the mistakes there. I need to know and know my mistakes. Thank you
A text corrigendum:
Hello, my friends! I thought out a new melody and then wrote a text. I fear, however, that he might have grammatical errors, because I am not a native speaker. Please tell me if there are some errors in the text? How do you assess him? I’d be happy if you gave me tips. Thank you.
thank your / the word “right” is both superfluous! / have / Introduction
“I thank your…. Who are you thanking? –> Dativ
Sorry, you can’t determine it with your name, but I thank you for all the answers you gave. For me, as a foreigner, this is so important if the Germans help me, not always happens it and not every day, a pity. So thank you again and hope that my next poems and songs will also be edited. I think my work will continue.
P.S. If shcon, I’m a friendin.
Well, a literary masterpiece isn’t that…
Besides: “Our life goes too fast” – where?
Did you think “Verificationwe are so fast?
I really appreciate it. Luckily there was and there was almost no mistake (the bird bird) in my poem, but you really showed me what mistakes I have in normal speech. It’s good and important. Thank you, my friend. I’m happy that my poem had no mistakes and remains beautiful. Thank you.
in the song text only one error: A bird –> bird ((villages are several, so plural)
Right, I missed it.
Grüss, Purushajan, thank you for this message. In German weklicjc was not right to say the bird. You noticed. Thank you, the poem is better and more beautiful.